The Warehouse Murder, Chapter 18

[snuffylicious.livejournal.com]

Title: The Warehouse Murder
Author: Snuffy Livingston (snuffylicious)
Category: CSI: Miami, crossover (Crossing Jordan), slash, smut, romance, mystery
Rating: This chapter -- PG-13 // Overall -- NC-17
Disclaimer: Don't own, don't sue, don't ask, don't tell.
Warnings: Slash, slashy sex, references to child molestation, violence, language
Complete or WiP: WIP

Latest -- http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3311087/18/
First -- http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3311087/1/

Comments

[seraphina_snape]

So, I come back online after a busy, busy week and there are two chapters waiting! How nice is that? It's 2-in-1 review time!

Chapter 17:
I was howling with laughter when the sex got (again) interrupted by a call. Of course, the lab being on fire was sort of important information... Sabotage! And Eric in the fire, and Nigel as the knight in hopefully-fireproof armour coming to the rescue. (So, if Nigel saves Eric's life, he'll just have to deal with him and Horatio... Hehe.)

Chapter 18:
"I think insanity is catching," Speed mumbled

That line wins.

"Well, you can either trust me or die in a fire, Delko!" he said, pulling the container open. "So what's it going to be?"

So does this one.

Damn, that is one inventive way of getting Eric out of there.

Horatio nodded. "And we… we are going to find out."

Tell me, if this wasn't happening at night time, there would be a reference to Horatio's sunglasses in this sentence, right? *g*

Great chapter.

~ sera

[snuffylicious.livejournal.com]

All right! Long review! Love those. :)

Yes, I'm very proud about Nigel's method of getting Eric out. It seems like something Nigel would definitely think of: an equal balance between geeky and brilliant.

And yeah, that would totally be a Sunglasses of Justice moment were they not necessary at night.

Next chapter will be pure smut, because bunches of people have requested (and by "requested," I really mean "ordered") that I finish off the sex scene that was cut off. And so I shall.

Back to plot in chapter twenty, though. :(

Also: GIP

[snuffylicious.livejournal.com]

<3

Re: Also: GIP

[seraphina_snape]

lol ♥ Niiiiice. Sunglasses of Justice - I suddenly want crackfic with that as a title.

~ sera