Heist, Chapters 6 & 7!

[snuffylicious.livejournal.com]

As it turns out, I forgot to post the notices for chapter six! Damn!

Title: Heist (sequel to The Warehouse Murder)
Author: Snuffy Livingston (snuffylicious)
Category: Crossover (Crossing Jordan), slash, mystery, action/adventure
Rating: Chapter 6: PG-13 // Chapter 7: PG-13 // Overall: NC-17
Disclaimer: Don't own, don't sue, don't ask, don't tell.
Warnings: Slash, slashy sex, violence, language, and a villain that makes you want to physically maim someone
Complete or WiP: WIP

Chapter Six
Chapter Seven

Comments

[seraphina_snape]

I was wondering what had happened to you and the story...

"Your aunt is a crazy cat lady?"

Ah, good thing I wasn't drinking anything at the time, especially with the exchange that followed.

I really love that intern. In the way that I would really hate him in real life.

Hmm, I always had the impression that Horatio was the older brother. But maybe I'm wrong.

Aww, a lab tech with a crush on Nigel. But was it just a cute scene, or a hidden plot point?

'Miami's Guardian Angel in Gay Love Affair'

I find it particularly amusing that a three-year relationship is called an "affair" - it's sort of like calling a 15 year prison sentence a "short stint in the joint".

I love the speaking French bit. I loved that scene in the Miami pilot where Horatio and Calleigh talk in Spanish to keep the FBI guy from understanding them.

that in the state of Florida, it is illegal for a same-sex couple to cohabitate?

What the fuck? That's seriously the law in Florida? You're not making this up for the sake of the story?

~ sera

[snuffylicious.livejournal.com]

Hmm, I always had the impression that Horatio was the older brother. But maybe I'm wrong.

I'm... PRETTY sure it's canon that Ray's older. But yeah, like you said, I could be wrong.

Aww, a lab tech with a crush on Nigel. But was it just a cute scene, or a hidden plot point?

Yeah. It's the plot point one.

What the fuck? That's seriously the law in Florida? You're not making this up for the sake of the story?

Nope. It's a law, if you can believe it. Florida is the third most backwards state in the union, next to Virginia and Texas.

[seraphina_snape]

Wow. It's kind of scary that there are still states that have those kinds of laws. Seriously scary. I'm feeling very glad right now that I'm not American.

~ sera

[snuffylicious.livejournal.com]

Yeah. And I'm feeling really envious of that.